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The Extra ‘L’ in Beautiful

The Extra ‘L’ in Beautiful

  • Bhanubhakta Dhungana
  • सोमबार, असार ८ २०८३


The village of Deurali, nestled against the terraced green hills of Okhaldhunga, was a place where news traveled faster than the morning mist. And the biggest news of the season was the arrival of Niranjan Sir. At twenty-six, Niranjan was a handsome, unmarried youth with a Master’s degree in English literature, who had chosen to eschew the bright lights of Kathmandu to teach at the local Shree Sitaladevi Secondary School. The village elders viewed him as an eccentric saint; the village mothers viewed him as the ultimate prize for their unmarried daughters.

Niranjan, however, was entirely dedicated to his books, his chalkboard, and his morning cup of local ‘chiya’. That was until the first day of the high school academic session, when a girl named Samikshya walked into his grade 12 classroom. Samikshya was, without exaggeration, the pride of Deurali. Her beauty was the kind that traditional poets wrote about; eyes as deep and clear as a himalayan spring, an effortless smile that could defuse a village border dispute, and a sharp, witty intellect that kept everyone on their toes. She sat in the middle row, her notebooks neatly covered in newspaper prints, looking at the new teacher with a mixture of curiosity and amusement.

“Good morning, class,” Niranjan began, his voice echoing in the tin-roofed classroom. “This year, we will not just memorize sentences to pass the board exams. We will learn to feel the language.” He turned to write a quote by Wordsworth on the blackboard. When he turned back, his eyes accidentally locked with Samikshya’s eyes. She gave a subtle, polite nod. In that single, brief microsecond, the young, fiercely disciplined teacher forgot the spelling of “beautiful.” He wrote it on the board as ‘beautifull.’ From the second row, a loud snicker broke the silence. It was Santosh, the village bully who had failed grade 12 twice and spent his afternoons revving his modified motorbike through the narrow village lanes. “Sir,” Santosh smirked, leaning back. “Is that the new British spelling, or did the Kathmandu air clog your brain?” Before Niranjan could redden, Samikshya stood up. “Santosh,” she said, her tone dripping with sweet sarcasm. “An extra ‘l’ just means there is extra love in the language. Though, looking at your last exam marks, I doubt you’d recognize a letter even if it introduced itself to you.” The entire classroom erupted into a roar of laughter. Niranjan cleared his throat, hiding a smile behind his textbook. The battle lines of the academic year were drawn, and a quiet, unacknowledged spark had just ignited between the chalkboard and the middle row.

As the months rolled by, Deurali School became the stage for a delightful comedy of errors. Niranjan was an exceptional teacher, but whenever Samikshya approached his desk to clarify a grammar rule, his professional armor began to crack. “Sir,” she would ask, leaning in closely over her notebook, her faint scent of wild jasmine completely distracting him. “What is the difference between a dangling modifier and a misplaced modifier?” “A dangling modifier,” Niranjan would stammer, his eyes darting anywhere but her face, “is like… when a sentence doesn’t have a clear subject. For example: ‘Walking down the village path, the mountain looked beautiful.’ The mountain isn’t walking, the person is.” “Ah,” Samikshya whispered, a playful dimple appearing on her cheek. “So if I say, ‘Looking at the blackboard, the heart started racing,’ is that dangling or just true?” Niranjan’s heart did a violent flip. He quickly handed back her notebook. “That… that requires further syntactic analysis, Samikshya. Go back to your seat.”

The village, meanwhile, was determined to get Niranjan married. Every Friday after school, the local tea shop owner, Bir Bahadur, would intercept him. “Niranjan Babu! You are living alone in that rented room, eating instant noodles. My sister’s daughter in Rumjatar makes the best ‘selroti’ in the eastern region. Just say the word!” “Thank you, Bir Dai, but my curriculum is my only companion right now,” Niranjan would laugh, making a quick escape. What Niranjan didn’t tell Bir Dai was that his evenings were spent grading essays with an unfair amount of enthusiasm whenever he reached Samikshya’s roll number. Her essays weren’t just standard answers; they were brilliant critiques of social structures, written with a maturity that amazed him.

The affection between them grew in the most innocent, unspoken ways permitted by village society. A shared glance during the morning assembly, an extra minute spent discussing poetry by the school library window, and the occasional exchange of local fruits. One afternoon, Samikshya brought him a handful of fresh green cardamoms from her father’s farm. “For your throat, Sir,” she said softly, looking around to ensure the other teachers were in the staffroom. “You talk too much in class.” “Only because someone actually listens, Samikshya,” Niranjan replied, his voice dropping its strict teacher persona entirely. They both knew the boundary. He was her teacher, an unmarried government employee; she was his student, a village girl with a bright future. They never spoke of love, yet it was written in every margin of her corrected notebooks.

The comedy reached its peak during the annual Deurali Mela, a vibrant festival where the entire village gathered to sing, dance, and eat local delicacies. Niranjan, wearing a crisp formal shirt, was volunteering at the school’s fund-raising stall. Santosh, the motorbike-riding failure, arrived with a group of rowdy friends. He had been eyeing Samikshya for months, his family’s wealth giving him an unearned sense of entitlement. Seeing Samikshya walking toward the school stall in a beautiful traditional red ‘fariya’, Santosh decided to make his move.

He stepped in front of her, holding a cheap plastic rose. “Samikshya, what’s the point of reading all those English books? They won’t keep you warm in the winter. Come ride with me to the city.” Samikshya frowned, trying to step around him. “Move aside, Santosh. I don’t ride on bikes with broken silencers and broken brains.” Santosh’s face darkened. He grabbed her wrist. “Don’t act high and mighty just because the new teacher gives you extra attention!” Before Samikshya could scream, a firm hand clamped down on Santosh’s shoulder. It was Niranjan. The mild-mannered scholar looked surprisingly intimidating. “Santosh,” Niranjan said, his voice dangerously low. “The school compound might be closed today, but my authority as your teacher is still wide open. Release her hand, or your internal marks will become a permanent tragedy.” “You think you’re a hero, Sir?” Santosh spat, but looking at Niranjan’s furious eyes and the gathering crowd of villagers, he reluctantly let go. “This isn’t Kathmandu. Things change quickly in the hills.” He kicked his bike to life and sped away, leaving a cloud of dust behind.

That evening, as the festival lights flickered and the local ‘selo’ music echoed through the valley, Niranjan and Samikshya walked a short distance down the quiet trail leading to her house. “Thank you, Niranjan,” she said softly, dropping the ‘Sir’ for the very first time. The moonlight caught the tears in her eyes. “Nobody has ever stood up for me like that.” Niranjan stopped walking and looked at her. The mountain air was cold, but his heart was ablaze. “I would stand up against the whole world for you, Samikshya. Finish your exams next month. Go to college. The day you graduate, I will come to your father’s house with a proper marriage proposal.” Samikshya smiled through her tears, her hand gently brushing against his. “I will be waiting, Niranjan. Every single day.”

The final board examination arrived, and Samikshya performed brilliantly. Niranjan watched her write her papers with absolute confidence. When the exams ended, the school closed for the long monsoon vacation. The monsoon that year was unlike anything Deurali had seen in decades. For twelve consecutive days, the skies opened up, unleashing a relentless torrent of water that turned the gentle village streams into roaring, muddy monsters. The hillsides, heavy with moisture, became unstable. Niranjan sat in his rented room, looking out at the gray landscape, worrying about Samikshya, whose house was located near the lower slopes of the village. Communication lines were down; electricity was gone.

On the thirteenth night, a deafening sound woke the entire village. It wasn’t thunder. It was a deep, low rumble that shook the earth;the terrifying sound of a major landslide. Niranjan grabbed his flashlight and rushed out into the pouring rain. The village square was in chaos. Men and women were running with torches, crying out names. “Where did it hit?” Niranjan shouted, grabbing Bir Bahadur’s arm. “The lower slope!” Bir Bahadur cried, his voice trembling with terror. “The whole ridge above Samikshya’s neighborhood gave way!” Niranjan’s blood turned to ice. He didn’t think about his safety, the mud, or the pitch-black darkness. He ran toward the lower slope like a man possessed, his flashlight beam cutting through the sheets of rain.

When he reached the site, his breath stopped. A massive wall of mud, boulders, and uprooted trees had swept down the hill, completely burying three houses. One of them belonged to Samikshya’s family. “Samikshya!” Niranjan screamed, dropping to his knees and digging into the cold, heavy mud with his bare hands. “Samikshya! Can you hear me?!” Other villagers arrived with shovels and tools, working frantically under the pouring rain. Hours blurred into an agonizing nightmare. Niranjan’s fingers were bleeding, his clothes torn, his voice reduced to a hoarse whisper as he continuously called out her name.

At dawn, the rain finally stopped, casting a cruel, clear light over the devastation. The rescue team finally reached the remains of the main bedroom.They found Samikshya. She lay beneath a collapsed wooden beam that had protected her upper body from being completely crushed, but the weight had been too much. Her eyes, once full of life and intelligence, were closed forever. Her face remained pristine, looking as if she were simply asleep, dreaming of poetry and cardamoms. Clutched tightly in her cold, lifeless hand was her Grade 12 English textbook, the one Niranjan had given her. Niranjan fell to his knees, a broken, empty sound escaping his throat. He picked up her mud-stained hand, pressing it against his forehead, weeping uncontrollably as the village elders stood around him in respect and profound sorrow. The beautiful love story that had bloomed in the margins of notebooks had been buried beneath the soil of Deurali.

One month later, Shree Sitaladevi Secondary School reopened. The mud had dried, the sun was shining, and the children returned to their classes. Niranjan Sir walked into the Grade 12 classroom. He looked ten years older. His youthful smile was gone, replaced by a deep, quiet stoicism. He turned to the blackboard and wrote the daily lesson plan, his hand steady but his eyes hollow. He looked at the middle row. Samikshya’s seat was kept empty by her classmates, a single wild jasmine flower placed on her wooden desk. Niranjan cleared his throat. “Today, we will discuss the concept of tragedy in literature. A tragedy is not just a story where characters die. It is a story that shows us the extreme fragility of human life and reminds us of our duties to one another.” The classroom was entirely silent, many students wiping away quiet tears.

Niranjan walked to the window, looking out at the green but scarred hills of Deurali. He addressed not just the students, but through them, the entire community. “Our village mourns the loss of our brightest star,” Niranjan said, his voice echoing with profound weight. “But let this tragedy not be in vain. Every year, during the monsoon, we talk about the rains, but we ignore our environment. We cut down trees on the slopes to build wider roads for motorbikes, we ignore the warning signs of the earth, and we lose our future because of our own negligence. Nature does not care about our wealth, our exams, or our beautiful dreams.”

He turned back to the class, pointing to the empty desk. “True education is not just about passing exams or getting jobs. It is about learning to live in harmony with our surroundings, protecting our hillsides, and taking care of one another before the mud claims our stories. Let us honor Samikshya by ensuring that no other daughter of this village is ever buried beneath the weight of our collective ignorance.” Niranjan Sir returned to his desk, took out his attendance register, and began the class. He lived the rest of his life in that village, never marrying, dedicating every single day to educating the children of Deurali, not just on how to read English, but on how to understand, respect, and survive the world they lived in.

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